Tuesday, November 11, 2014

Did You Hear?

It’s been awhile since we last spoke
But not so long, as things go
Did you hear that I scaled a mountain?
No. I’m sure you didn’t know

It feels like ages since I saw your face
Then again, only yesterday
Did you hear that I broke the record?
No.  I’m sure not yet today

My hair has grown three inches
My smile is almost right
The scars that I have caused
Are healing up quite nice

There are cobwebs on the game boards
And dust upon the shelves
As if people left a living place
Running to save themselves

It’s been awhile since we called our names
But not so long, as time drifts past
Did you hear that I won the whole thing?
No.  I’m sure you haven’t asked

It feels like ages since we laughed together
Then again, a slight moment in time
Did you hear that I climbed the ladder?
No.  I’m sure you’re doing fine

My hair has grown three inches
My smile is almost right
The scars that I have caused
Are healing up quite nice

There are cobwebs on the game boards
And dust upon the shelves
As if people left a living place
Running to save themselves



2 comments:

  1. I really really like this one, Karie. Great language and flow. You hit that sweet spot of just enough vulnerability but still vague enough for others to relate.

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    1. Thank you Miss Amy. A difficult one to write and to read. I appreciate your sweet, kind words.

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