The Storm
The rain battered against the windows and doors, demanding to gain
entrance. The shadows of the leafless
branches swayed in the driving winds, their skeletal arms performing a dance of
the dead. Lightening illuminated the
world and thunder shook the earth - Mother Nature's equivalent to shining a
spotlight on the players and giving a standing ovation. There was no visible life outside. Just echoes of the storm and whispers from
the grave.
They had been prepared for this night their entire lives. Their mother spoke of it with reverence, and
told them how lucky they were to witness this miracle. "Do you know how fortunate we are,
children?" she would say.
"This is a gift. This is an
honor." She would speak in hushed tones, to convey the seriousness of the
night.
Since the twins birth, they were brought up to believe that they were the
Chosen. They were told time and again
that when the storm approached on the eve of their 12th birthday, all would see
what their Mother had always known. They
were not like all of those little brats running around the seaside town. They were more than the bastard children of a
woman who found herself pregnant after a drunken one-night stand. No.
They were Chosen. They were
better than all of those other creatures that sat in school, with their shiny
white sneakers and their designer jeans.
They were above material things.
They were above everything.
The storm raged on and their mother took out the battered book of poetry
and rhymes that they each knew by heart.
The three sat in the flickering glow of the candlelight reciting each
verse, as if an incantation:
I am not of this world, I am of the sea
My father is King and watches over thee
One day he will come, to reclaim what he owns
In a storm of great strength, and a rattling of bones
My father the King will look down from his height
Casting a curse that will rage most the night
He will gather us children, and save us from strife
My father the King will give us new life.
The verses were read with the solemnity of a religious service. Both children were hopeful and excited, but
took great care not to show their mother their joy. For "Joy", she had always reminded
them, "was nothing but giving in to your weaknesses. Joy is for fools. You are the children of Kings, and no King
wants a fool for a child." The
children were expected to appreciate their good fortune, but not to show
happiness with it. "Royalty is not
happy to be royal," she would chastise, "Royalty knows it deserves
its place. To show happiness would mean
you don't truly feel you belong in the Kingdom.
We can't have that."
****
The storm raged on and there was a knocking at the door. The three of them looked at each other with
apprehensive glances - this wasn't how they were to be given life. A knock on the door was never in the
tale.
The Mother opened the door cautiously, carrying the candle and leaving the
chain lock on the door. Through the
crack, their neighbor appeared. A
gentleman who can only be described as "round". He was one of the only people who spoke to
the family of his own free will. He was
kind, but the mother distrusted anyone who was kind. "Yes?" The mother asked, in an annoyed tone. "I was just making sure you and the kids
were safe, Ma’am.", said the neighbor.
"It's one heck of a storm and it looks like the sea is rising
fast. If you'd like some company and
some hot food, my wife was able to make dinner right before the electricity
went out. There's more than enough and
we'd love to see you." He peeked
through the small crack in the door, "I know these types of storms can
scare the kids." The mother
swallowed hard and tried to hide her displeasure at the interruption. "Thank you Mr. Shielding. We are doing just fine. Best you get home now to your wife and make
sure she's safe and secure."
Without another word, the Mother slammed the door and slipped the
deadlock in to place.
****
****
September
14, 2013, Massachusetts (AP) - by Kaylee Kreiger: In an unexplained and tragic
scene, the bodies of two boys, aged 12 years old, were found on the beach in
this small seaside community of Monarch, Massachusetts. Due to their age, the names and details have
not yet been released to the press.
During the storm that ravaged the coastline last evening on September
13, it appears these boys might have been playing in the surf when the water
overcame them. More details to follow in
the coming days. Mr. Shielding, a
neighbor, can account for their safety around 8:00pm, during the night of the
storm
September
21, 2013, Massachusetts (AP) - by Kaylee Kreiger: More details are emerging about
the two boys who were assumed to have drowned during the storm on September
13th. The coroner’s office has issued a
statement indicating that the boys death was not due to drowning. The apparent cause of death was a deep and
fatal slash to both boys' throats.
There are no suspects at this time; however investigators have not yet
been able to locate the boy’s mother.
September 30, 2013, Massachusetts (AP) - by Kaylee Kreiger: The mother of the two slain
boys found on the beach on September 14, 2013 has been located 15 miles from
the seaside town. Ms. Green was found in
a bar off of Route 18, her whereabouts called in by the proprietor of the
establishment. A fellow patron of the
bar at the time of the arrest indicated that Ms. Green was continually
repeating a poem about a King and the return to the sea. “She seemed off her rocker, if you asked me.”
The anonymous patron commented.
Dedicated to Ben Roach, for being a pal.
Karie, this is a good story. I love your voice in this. A smooth and gripping and mysterious story that is perfect for Halloween. Adding in the news feeds at the end is a great touch.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Glen. That means quite a bit coming from the Master of the Macabre!! :)
DeleteI'm honoured to have such a great piece dedicated to me, Karie. I meant every word. You are a very talented writer with skills many could only ever wish to have. I love how you push the boundaries and experiment with different styles with every piece. We’re always guaranteed something different and fresh from you.
ReplyDeleteLOL you know what? I’ve had Riders in the Storm stuck in my head ever since I read this hahaha
Thanks again for the dedication :D
The honor is mine. Thank you taking the time to read this piece before I even posted it today. You provide such encouragement and I'm very lucky to know you. Your works are extraordinary and I can't wait to say I "knew him when" :)
DeleteA gripping read, Karie. I thought I knew where the story was going...because there are legends in Scotland about mythical creatures called selkies - the seal people - males being handsome in human form, and having seductive powers over human women. So I was really kept on my toes when your story took an even darker turn! I enjoyed reading it.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Teagan! I'm glad when I can "getcha" at the end :) It's interesting to know about the legend in Scotland! I've never heard of it...might need to use that for further writings!
DeleteThanks as always for your wonderful comments and for reading!
My pleasure and by the way most selkie tales end in tragedy too.
DeleteYes! Nice.
ReplyDeleteThank for reading Bruce! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for taking the time to comment :)
DeleteI loved this....the rhyme set the sinister tone and was gripping. Loved the new reports...great way to end. Great Great read!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteoops...news reports!! typo
DeleteThanks so much Greta! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
DeleteReally enjoyed this, had just the right amount of creepy to make me wonder if anyone is reenacting this outside right now. (It’s storming over here). Looking forward to more!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Brian! Take a look outside every once in a while and make sure all is right ;) Thanks for reading and commenting!
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