I often
wonder
You, the man
who stings
If you were
to have a daughter
Would that somehow
change some things?
Would that
awaken in you
Memories
when you did great harm
Would you feel
a painful shudder
As she
nestles in your arm?
Would you
recognize your actions
Understand
your guilt
Would you
promise to try harder
Tearing down
what you have built?
Would you
own up to your transgressions
Try and be a
better man
Would you
take the steps you need
To fix what
you still can?
And so I’m
left to wonder
You, the man
who stung
Now that you
have a daughter
Have the
changes at last begun?
This really resonates, Karie. Truly a profound piece of writing. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Amy. You write so beautifully, this is a tremendous compliment coming from you :)
DeleteLove it so much. Karma in its essence.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Su!! Karma will stand up!!
DeleteThis goes to deep places. This is why I love reading poetry. I can slip into someones thoughts for a brief moment and see things through their eyes. A beautiful poem Karie and you didn't even have to be awake to write it. You are a sleeping genius!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Peter! I can't express how much I appreciate your support and kind words.
DeletePowerful, Karie.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mr. Glen!
DeleteLove the rhetorical questions and implied answers. Well written Lady Butterfly.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much! I really appreciate your feedback. Thank so much for reading :)
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